Developing the Script- Alejandra A

 

Developing the Characters

The first part of the script is going to focus on creating a clear distinction between two opposing main characters; Valeria, the spy, and Bella, the target. The choice of names was deliberate as well. The name "Agent Valeria" has an air of mystery and strength to it and fits well into the typical femme fatale type spy found in most thrillers. On the other hand, the name "Bella", seems soft and more innocent than "Valeria", and immediately tells us who is the victim/target.
This allowed us to add to the themes of deception and double identities commonly used in spy movies. Valeria, represents control, secrecy and danger; while Bella represents normalcy and vulnerability.

Using the Storyboard to Build the Script

The script was built upon our story board; therefore every action we made visually, was supported by the actions being written into the script. In addition, most of the beginning of this script is movement (not talking). The click of the heels as she walks in establish her confidence and seriousness.

In the mirror scene, we see the spy prepare for her mission. This creates suspense and shows the use of the wig and make-up as a part of her disguise.

In addition to creating a sense of suspense through the visual elements of the script, timing is also very important. The ticking of the watch symbolizes how precise and planned the spy is. Therefore, the slow and deliberate movements throughout the script create a sense of thriller suspense that will keep the audience interested in the smallest details.

Building Suspense Through Structure

The development of the script's structure was designed to build tension. A calm spy walks into a busy bar and sits down close to the target. She has no idea she is in danger as she sits there with her laptop and the audience knows the danger exists. As the spy pours poison into the drink, it is done so quietly and smoothly, showing how professional the agent is. However, this also created conflict for the spy. What if the wrong person drank the poisoned drink? 

The timer at the end emphasized the time pressure and made the audience wonder what would occur next. The ending of the script followed the common thriller convention of raising questions instead of providing answers in the first scene. Overall, the script used minimal dialogue and controlled pacing along with the great contrast of characters to create suspense. The basis of the script coming from the storyboard allowed us to ensure each action contributed to building the mysterious atmosphere of the opening of the film.